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To what extent was propaganda the main reason for the Nazi consolidation of power, 1933–1934?
A focused investigation with genuine source evaluation and a sound, evidence-based argument. To reach the top bands, sustain the critical analysis across the whole of Criterion B and weigh the competing explanations more consistently toward your conclusion.
~2180 words · About 2,200 words. Footnotes, references and the bibliography are not counted.Estimated
15–18
out of 25
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Focus on these first
The highest-impact changes, in order.
Sustain analysis across the whole investigation
Criterion B carries 15 of the 25 marks. Replace the narrative passages with focused analysis that keeps returning to your research question.
Investigation (Criterion B)
Weigh the competing explanations explicitly
Set propaganda against terror and legal measures and judge their relative importance, rather than listing them side by side.
Investigation & conclusion (Criterion B)
Evaluate both sources on origin, purpose and content
Apply the same depth of evaluation to your second source as you did to the Goebbels speech.
Sources (Criterion A)
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Criterion breakdown
Criterion A
Identification and evaluation of sources
4 / 6
How to improve
- Evaluate the second source to the same depth as the Goebbels speech
- Refer explicitly to origin, purpose and content for both sources
To reach 5/6
Analyse the value and limitations of BOTH sources with explicit reference to origin, purpose and content — not just the Goebbels speech.
Criterion B
Investigation
10 / 15
How to improve
- Cut the narrative passages and keep each paragraph tied to the research question
- Weigh propaganda against terror and legal measures explicitly, rather than listing them
To reach 11/15
Sustain critical analysis throughout, remove the descriptive passages, and weigh the competing perspectives (propaganda vs terror vs legal means) consistently toward a reasoned conclusion.
Criterion C
Reflection
3 / 4
How to improve
- Add a second challenge specific to this investigation
To reach 4/4
Connect a second concrete methodological challenge from your own investigation — for example corroborating a propaganda source against independent evidence.
What's already working
- A clear, focused research question carried through the investigation
- Genuine evaluation of a source's value and limitations
- Relevant use of historiography (Kershaw) to bring in perspective
- A reasoned conclusion that follows from the evidence